My Comment On Room8 Paerata School's Blog

I have been blog commenting and one of the blogs I commented on was Paerata room 8's blog they have a calf club so I commented on their blog because it hooked me in here is the comment.

There is the link for the blog I commented on-http://room8paerata.blogspot.co.nz/p/calf-club-floral-demonstrations.html
If you do not know how to write a quality blog comment here is some tips:
Say what you like and why you like it
Maybe you can say one next step
Ask the person something they might reply and you can reply back like making a connection.

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4/6/15 JV Speedwrite: ALL ABOUT THE LIFE OF STARS

Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.

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My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
outlines the main features of the subject
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

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Begin Writing Here:

[Heading/Title of Information Report]

ALL ABOUT THE LIFE OF STARS

[Introduction]

Do you know what a star is?Well I will tell you all about stars.Have you also wondered what the stars are made out of?Star are bright and made out of dust and light and gas also known as plasma.

[Paragraph 1 -Appearance of a star]

Stars are different sizes in fact they are also different colours. Some are read some are bright white .Some stars are tiny because they are a long distance from earth where we life.Also stars are made out of heat and gas and dust too like the sun in fact the sun is a star say WHAT.

[Paragraph 2 -Types of stars]

The sun is a star too that is made out of millions of other star and that is made out of heat and gas so the son might be SO HOT. It is the closest star to earth.There are different kinds of stars there is a nova star,a supergiant star and a dwarf star.One of our smallest known star in our galaxy is VB10 it is only around 20% larger than jupite.

[Paragraph 3 - Life Cycle of a star]

Most stars are born within a huge cloud of gas and dust called Nebulae.Some of the New star are born in the center of the Nebulae.The force of gravity inside is so intense that nothing can escape it,not even light.A star’s main sequence lasts depends on the mass of the star and how much hydrogen fuel the star contains.The energy produced helps to blow much of the disc of the gas away, leaving the new star shining brightly.

[Conclusion]

I hope this help you and you will want to writing your own report about stars.Did you enjoy my pieces of writing?

Here is a link you might like.http://www.fun-facts.org.uk/planets/stars.htm