Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.
My Information Report Success Criteria:
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My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
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My end paragraph/conclusion:
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Begin Writing Here:
[Heading/Title of Information Report]
ALL ABOUT THE LIFE OF STARS
[Introduction]
Do you know what a star is?Well I will tell you all about stars.Have you also wondered what the stars are made out of?Star are bright and made out of dust and light and gas also known as plasma.
[Paragraph 1 -Appearance of a star]
Stars are different sizes in fact they are also different colours. Some are read some are bright white .Some stars are tiny because they are a long distance from earth where we life.Also stars are made out of heat and gas and dust too like the sun in fact the sun is a star say WHAT.
[Paragraph 2 -Types of stars]
The sun is a star too that is made out of millions of other star and that is made out of heat and gas so the son might be SO HOT. It is the closest star to earth.There are different kinds of stars there is a nova star,a supergiant star and a dwarf star.One of our smallest known star in our galaxy is VB10 it is only around 20% larger than jupite.
[Paragraph 3 - Life Cycle of a star]
Most stars are born within a huge cloud of gas and dust called Nebulae.Some of the New star are born in the center of the Nebulae.The force of gravity inside is so intense that nothing can escape it,not even light.A star’s main sequence lasts depends on the mass of the star and how much hydrogen fuel the star contains.The energy produced helps to blow much of the disc of the gas away, leaving the new star shining brightly.
[Conclusion]
I hope this help you and you will want to writing your own report about stars.Did you enjoy my pieces of writing?
Here is a link you might like.http://www.fun-facts.org.uk/planets/stars.htm
Kia ora Jasman,
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing your speedwrite within the 40 minutes.
Your next learning steps:
1) Proofread for punctuation errors. (For example the last sentence in your introduction should be ‘stars’ and not ‘star’)
2) Check for spelling errors (For example red instead of read).
Hi Jasman,
ReplyDeleteWe really loved your information report about Stars. We learned about stars and it was really fun to know that the smallest star is called VB10.
Now we want to write our own report about the stars because you showed us more information about them.
From Gargee, Moe, Breanna and O'Neill Class
Hi,O'Neill Class
DeleteI am glad you all like my report it was kind of like a test and I hope you all do well in your report I guess you will feel like a year 6 after writing your very own report.
What was your favourite part?
By:Jasman have fun