The Book Floodland-Should Zoe tru Dooby,Spat and Mumchkin

This is my writing and my thinking of what should Zoe truth Dooby,Spat and Mumchkin

I don’t really think that Zoe should trust them because they and the and land look and seemed very suspicious. Dooby was a child and got to be the boss of a land he was very bossy too.The only people on the land were kids and one grown-up.I don’t think the children felt good and was helped or safe with Dooby as captain.

How did Dooby get to be the boss of the land?

I Have Researched These Four People

This is the facts I find out about here is a padlet this is my first time using one I hope you like it.Please don't forget it comment.Thanks Jasman :)

Jasman's Term 3 Reflection 2015 (Blog Post)

Backward-Looking:

What have been your learning highlights this term?

My highlights this year is learning how to play touch rugby and learning to help other because it is a care thing to do and they become your friends sometimes.

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Inward-Looking:

What were your Learner Profile goals for Term 2? Have your goals changed? Are you on track to meet your goals?

My learner profile goal for term 2 was to manage myself in my learning and to get my work done on time.I think I have on track with my learning.My new goal is to not talk to others whlie I am doing my work.

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Outward-Looking:

If you were the teacher, what comments would you make about your learning so far?

I don’t really know but I think I am on track with my learning but need to work harder with maths.

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Forward-Looking:

As you look back at your learning so far, what's one thing that you would like to try to improve upon?

I will like to improve with my maths learning and learn more about it.

4/6/15 JV Speedwrite: ALL ABOUT THE LIFE OF STARS

Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.

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My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
outlines the main features of the subject
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

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Begin Writing Here:

[Heading/Title of Information Report]

ALL ABOUT THE LIFE OF STARS

[Introduction]

Do you know what a star is?Well I will tell you all about stars.Have you also wondered what the stars are made out of?Star are bright and made out of dust and light and gas also known as plasma.

[Paragraph 1 -Appearance of a star]

Stars are different sizes in fact they are also different colours. Some are read some are bright white .Some stars are tiny because they are a long distance from earth where we life.Also stars are made out of heat and gas and dust too like the sun in fact the sun is a star say WHAT.

[Paragraph 2 -Types of stars]

The sun is a star too that is made out of millions of other star and that is made out of heat and gas so the son might be SO HOT. It is the closest star to earth.There are different kinds of stars there is a nova star,a supergiant star and a dwarf star.One of our smallest known star in our galaxy is VB10 it is only around 20% larger than jupite.

[Paragraph 3 - Life Cycle of a star]

Most stars are born within a huge cloud of gas and dust called Nebulae.Some of the New star are born in the center of the Nebulae.The force of gravity inside is so intense that nothing can escape it,not even light.A star’s main sequence lasts depends on the mass of the star and how much hydrogen fuel the star contains.The energy produced helps to blow much of the disc of the gas away, leaving the new star shining brightly.

[Conclusion]

I hope this help you and you will want to writing your own report about stars.Did you enjoy my pieces of writing?

Here is a link you might like.http://www.fun-facts.org.uk/planets/stars.htm

The awesome world of the Moon you such know all about

The awesome world of the Moon  you such know all about



Do you know why the Moon looks different every night? The Moon’s appearance changes over time each night because  of the way the moon is facing. The Moon is a grey faint & white looking asteroid.


 Moon’s orbit around the Earth
The Moon’s orbit around the Earth is tilted from our orbit around the Sun which the Sun is made out of heat and light.All parts of the Moon are lit in turn by the Sun. The moon is also the easiest celestial object also known as (A HEAVENLY OBJECT) to find in the night sky.


Phases of the Moon
The Moon has 8 phase and it takes 1 month for the Moon too do all of them. The Moon’s phase are -New moon, Waxing crescent, First quarter, Waxing gibbous, Full moon, Waning gibbous, Last quarter and  Waning crescent.The lunar month is the 29.53 days it takes to go from one new moon to the next say WHAT.


The Moons reflect
The Moon shines because it reflects light that has come from the sun. It does not make it our light.The Moon takes 28 days to move around the earth.As it moves,the Moon seen to charge shape.When it is a new Moon we can’t see it at all.


Now I hope you have learned why the Moon looks different every night.I also hope this can help you write about why the moon looks different every night and the names of the Moon's phase.Are you going to write about the Moon? Here is a link about some more important about the Moon.
http://www.coolkidfacts.com/moon-facts-for-kids/ 
There is a picture of all the phase of the Moon.

The World Of Mars

 THE WORLD OF MARS

Have you ever wondered how wonderful Mars could be?If people could live on Mars, Mars orbit or what it was named after?Well Mars was named after a roman god of war. Sometimes Mars is also called earth's little brother.Mars is more like earth than the other planets.

Mars Surface features:

Mars has a hard crust and is covered with old volcanoes and rocky canyons and it also has red and king of pink dust sometimes there is  really bad dust storms. Mars is also easy to confuse with a real star. It also is the fourth planet and is very different to earth.Mars has has frozen polar caps and has no H2O also called water.Mars has very thin atmosphere and is half the size of earth!!!The reddish color of mars is caused by the presence of dust in its sandy soil.

Could human live on Mars:

Have you ever wondered if people could live on Mars? How ever Mars is really  freezing cold in the night and has frozen poles.The first mission to Mars simply just flew right PAST Mars.It also is the first planet an astronaut would reach after leaving Earth.Since January 2004,the robotic rovers opportunity and spirit have been trekking around Mars.To go to space you have to travel hundreds of millions of kilometers.

Mars orbit:

In 1971 Marinara went into space to orbit the Mars .Mars also lies on the outside of  the earth.Mars takes 687 days to go around the sun!Also Mars spins axis every 24 hours.Mars rotates on its axis about as quickly as the Earth.Mars is approximately 227.9 KM’s  away from the son.

Human exploration of Mars: 

While  NO humans have stepped one simply feet on the martian surface, there have been several probes sent to the planet. The first mission to Mars simply just flew RIGHT PAST MARS!!!Also Mars is thousand of Km away from Earth.Since January 2004, the robotic rovers opportunity and spirit have been trekking around Mars but has not landed on it yet. 

I hope this really helped you and you will really like to writing your very own report about Mars or other planets.

Here is a link that might help you with your report:http://www.sciencekids.co.nz/sciencefacts/planets/mars.html

Making Friends

This is my Google Slide about how to make friends I hope it will help you and I hope you enjoy it.

All About ANZAC

This is my  Thinglink about ANZAC Day and what happens in World war 1.

Term 2 Week 1

WHAT:In McCahon Class this week we are learning all about WW1 and ANZAC.We for been learning how they live and what they eat and why they are doing a war.We have also learned the ANZAC stand for.


SO WHAT:It makes me think about it and makes me what to learn more about it.I can also now help my friend and family understand what WW1 is and the cool facts that I have learned.I can also tell them about ANZAC.


NOW WHAT:I can now use this important facts in my writing. And help people understand what the big and new and different words mean.I can also use the facts in my test our writing

Poetry

In Flox class we have been doing Poetry. My favorite poem that I loved writing was called a Diamante poem and it is called that because it is shaped like a diamond. Here is some of my poems.

Kittens

Fluffy, cuddly,cute

hissing,licking,playing

Playful little golden Jessie,wet nose

scratching,shining,roaming

bright,puffy

kittens

 The Blue Waves at night

Crash! Went the cold blue waves.

I was looking at the Rough waves they were as fast as a tiger.

It was as cold as ice moving side to side.

The water was shining like the hot sun in the pretty sky.

The water was splashing it was so loud it was clear and fresh like fruit.

Happiness

Happiness is as bright as the sun

The taste of chocolate

Happiness smell like banana mike

and a fresh new garden.

It sounds like people laughing and enjoying and having fun.

Happiness looks like bright colors.

Happiness feels like hanging out with your families and friends.            

cooking Jasman: After work My mum has to cook But sometimes its my dad They always argue The same day same time Dad was watching T.V While mum was washing the dishes Mum: Reginald OH MY GOD He was not look at all He was putting his legs on the table Dad: Its not my turn to cook Mum: Yes it is get here and start cook You are as lazy as a small hairy snail Jasman: Why do you always fight about tiny little things And plus how bad and cooking be Mum and Dad: WHY DON’T YOU DO IT THEN!! Jasman: OK how bad can it be.